You have a draft of
your article, now what? First give yourself a cheer and celebrate, then begin
the rewriting process. Rewriting?? Yes, you have done a first draft, hopefully
including all of the necessary parts, but it is rough, and needs a lot of
polishing. I suggest reading through the draft in full, make notes to yourself
(I use track changes) and mark areas that are not complete, may not be clear to
someone reading it for the first time, or need more support with citations.
Then start at the beginning and read each sentence aloud, is there a way to
make it clearer, more concise? Picture your grandmother, who knows nothing
about your area of study, reading it: would she understand that sentence? Check
for any pronouns (they, he, and she); is it clear to whom the pronouns are
referring? Check your plurals versus possessives (this makes me crazy when they
are wrong): plurals (e.g. “girls”) do not have an apostrophe, possessives do
have an apostrophe (e.g., “the girl’s bike;” “the girls’ bikes”). Do you know a
former English major? Someone who is a great writer? If so, ask them to read
through your paper and offer suggestions.